http://randy-byers.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] randy-byers.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] akirlu 2008-03-13 08:06 pm (UTC)

I kind of like that first haiku. "yes it is far far" -- a place too far, third place. Second place is far, and third place is far far.

Hm. Just realized that the generator thinks "pm" is a one-syllable word.

4 pm, 6, or
later -- the pub -- third place pub --
yes it is far far

(3 comments)

Post a comment in response:

This account has disabled anonymous posting.
(will be screened if not validated)
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting

If you are unable to use this captcha for any reason, please contact us by email at support@dreamwidth.org

 
Notice: This account is set to log the IP addresses of everyone who comments.
Links will be displayed as unclickable URLs to help prevent spam.